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Re: One Good that came from Crime
Tempted as I am to chew out the n00b first, I'll review beforehand. :P This was good. I thought the rhythm was a bit off, but I really liked the ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Arekkusu- blades of darkness
Toast. Ilike toast. Toast is good. Sorry, what was I talking about? I must have been daydreaming. Probably about toast again. Mmm, toast... (Two hours later) Sorry, what? Oh yeah, ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Broken Monotones
This is really good. I like how you described a forgotten someone. The world wakes bleary eyed, to another day of drizzle and dull skies, oblivious to my perception, and ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Dawning
I really don't see where you're going with this. I like the rhyming and rhythm, though. I just don't see the meaning in this. Also, I'd like to point out ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Stubborn Lover
Hello, Because. :). I really like your poem. I love the repition you used in this. I also really like your rhythm and rhyming. I think you should extend this, ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Because I'm Gangsta!
I really like this. I love how you described a gangsta in details. This is a really funny, but, yet true poem about the gangsta society. I like the repitition ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Them
This is rally good, Tiff. I love how true this is. You don't have a lot of rythm in this, but it's really excellent. I love how you described certain ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: As Lovely as it Saeems
Hello, Amira. I really like this. I think you should build on from this. Extrend it, and add more details. I like how you started off by describing someone special. ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: It's red, it's blue
I don't really like the rhythm or flow to this. Also, I don't see what you're saying in this. This doesn't make sense to me. That's the argument they say ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Your Soul to Hollywood $$$ (You’ll Never Get it Back)
Wow. This is amazing, Vernon. I love how you described in specific details about the gift and curse fame sets upon people. I love it. Very good job. Hands down, ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Running the Race
First of all, allow me to welcome you to YWS. I'm Rick. After you get 25 reviews, you can access the YWS chat. Also, you need atleast two reviews before ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: We're Alive
First of all, allow me to welcome you to YWS. I'm Rick. After you get 25 reviews, you can access the YWS chat. Also, you need atleast two reviews before ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: First Kiss
I really liked this. I liked how you put a girl's first kiss in depth description. I also liked how you described how nervous one can be when they're about ...
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: There's something about addictive iconics
For the nth time , it was believed as the coming out of some shitty hot celeb. For the nth time , it was magnified into the confessions of a ...
Apr 20, 2008 -
Re: Illusion
Hm..I like this, Linds, but I don't see what this have to do with an illusion. Also, you had good rhythm in the first stanza. It kind of fades in ...
Apr 20, 2008